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(Reforming Equines Can Be Tricky)
(Chapter 1)

Meeting Twilight in the midst of twilight... the concept amused Rarity more than she cared to admit.

Earlier that day, her fellow unicorn had requested an audience with her around this time. As she knocked on the door to Twilight Sparkle's library house, she pondered just what the cause of her summons could have been. Twilight hadn't bothered to tell her why she was asking for Rarity's presence, but Rarity fully expected to be let in on that issue the second she was allowed inside--and, given what she knew of her friend's penchant for logical progression, for things to go like clockwork thereafter.

What she did not expect when the door opened was to see Twilight Sparkle dressed in full Grand Galloping Gala regalia.

Rarity knew the outfit all too well--after all, it was her own design. Starlight, star bright, stars all over Twilight's gown and shoes to light up a glorious night. Even if it had been the simplest of the designs she had crafted for the Gala, it was one she was most proud of--in part because it held a secret only she knew about.

"Twilight?" Rarity looked over her friend in genuine surprise. "You do realize the Gala was last week, yes?"

Twilight smiled and nodded. "I do. But I figured it would be appropriate. I'm sure you're wondering why I called this meeting in the first place."

"Just a bit, yes."

Twilight put her front hoof to her face in a mock-thinking pose. "Well, I was just noting to myself what a great job you did making this gown for me."

"Well, I... um... thank you again," Rarity said, a little flustered and still confused.

Twilight, however, ignored Rarity's reaction and pressed the issue, walking towards her friend. Her voice took on an edge easily identifiable as sarcasm. "It's just such a striking, powerful design! Tell me, Rarity: should I applaud you for cleverness..." She turned around in her gown. "...or chastise you for laziness?"

"What? I'm sorry, Twilight, but I'm afraid I don't follo-" Rarity started... and then, suddenly, she did. "Ohhhhh."

So Twilight had figured it out, after all.

"Oh, Twilight," Rarity said with a cunning smile. "You wound me to the quick! Inspiration can come from any number of places. I'm sure you know this better than anypony. You've already proven your fondness for taking on the roles of others, have you not?"

Twilight recoiled, miming having taken a magic blast to the heart. "Ooof! Low blow, don't you think?"

"Merely repaying in kind. Just be glad I'm fond of that fondness." Rarity sighed. "But yes, I admit I was a little beside myself when I saw just how well you took to the design--considering from where it was partially lifted."

"I thought it looked familiar, but it didn't completely hit me until the Gala."

"The Gala? Why then?"

"Because the Gala... I saw her there, Rarity. I'm sure of it."

Rarity perked up. "You what? You saw her? And you told none of us?"

"Well... it was more like I sensed her, but only for a few moments. Unicorns of a high enough magic level can do that--and now that I think about it, she disappeared just as quickly as I felt her presence. She must have known I was nearby, too."

"Perhaps she didn't want to be noticed?"

"I'd believe that. I got a brief glimpse of her when were were close, near the outskirts of the castle grounds. It... it was depressing, Rarity. That's all I can say. I don't think she was invited. She was on the outside, looking in. I think she felt like she belonged there... and under different circumstances, she might have."

Such empathy coming from Twilight, Rarity noticed... then narrowed her eyes accusingly. "You... you blame yourself, don't you?"

Twilight hesitated. "What if I do?"

"That's your decision... but I thought you knew better. Anything that filly did, she brought on herself." Rarity shook her head. "I suppose that explains your restoration endeavor, as well."

Twilight gasped. "You know about that too?" Frantically, she pulled Rarity close and shook her. "Who else? Who else does?"

"T-T-Twilight, T-Twilight!" Fighting dizziness, Rarity managed to push her away. "Ease off the red alert! At present, only myself and Applejack are aware of your... pet project. In fact, it was Applejack who found it first, whilst scouting for possible expansion grounds for her family's farm."

Twilight sighed. "Awww. I forgot she goes pretty much everywhere."

"You're rather lucky, actually. She tried to tell the rest of us, but Ponyville will always be Ponyville, I'm afraid. I was the only one not busy yelling at something or somepony at the time." She paused, as if debating something in her mind, then said, "Mind if check on your progress?"

"You really want to?" Twilight asked. "Didn't you just say-"

"I wish to see your dedication firsthoof. Regardless of the subject matter, I always love watching you put your mind to something. It seems nothing can stand in your way when you do."

"...all right," said a blushing Twilight, and after ten seconds of concentration, they were suddenly in a clearing several miles away. "There it is," she said, pointing to a half-rebuilt wooden pile. "I sort of wish this wasn't taking so long."

"Well, it did get smashed to pieces," Rarity replied. "That sort of thing does take a while to fix." She walked around Twilight's 'project.' "But wow, look at you. You're really going through with this."

"The inside's proving to be the toughest. None of us have ever been in this thing before, so I have to improvise. I just hope it can compare to what she originally had."

Rarity nodded. "Still! Given our first encounter with her, I'm not sure if I would have done the same thing you're doing in your place--and I'm absolutely sure Applejack wouldn't have."

"Really? How do you know?"

"She spent quite some time saying so. Something about 'low-down, no good, dirty, can't-get-right-fer-nothin'-"

"Ouch! Okay, okay, I get the point."

"And speaking frankly, I very much agree with her point of view. I'm not sure the pony you're dedicating this scale of effort to truly deserves it."

Twilight dropped her head. "I'm not sure either. It's sort of why I was afraid to tell you guys."

"As I said before, this is your decision, not ours. You do what you think is right. However, there's one pony on Equestria who I'm sure would condone what you're doing."


"Princess Celestia." Rarity wrapped one front leg around Twilight and nodded towards the wooden structure--a vehicle, she had noticed, whose wheels were already back in place. "I honestly feel she would be pleased if she saw this. Random acts of kindness are a cornerstone staple of friendship. As is forgiveness."

"Thanks, Rarity. I wish I could say this was random, though."

"Oh?" said a mildly surprised Rarity. "You have reasons?"

"I do." Twilight stared up at the night sky in reminiscence. "I remember when I was like her, back in Canterlot. There was a time when I would act superior; flaunting my magic, lashing out... then I got put in my place. I chose to live a pretty solitary life after that, not letting anypony get close to me outside of Spike. The way I figured it, books didn't get mad at you. They never talked back, you couldn't hurt their feelings, and they couldn't hurt yours."

Rarity chose not to comment. While she sympathized with Twilight, her thoughts on such a mindset were best kept to herself.

"Then Celestia took me under her wing, and guided me to meet ponies willing to look past my faults and be friends with me anyway. That's why I was so afraid to show just how powerful I really was for so long. I didn't want to risk losing the gift I'd been given. The gift of a clean slate."

Rarity looked at the vehicle again. "And you want to do that for her."

Twilight nodded. "Everypony makes mistakes in life. Everypony deserves a second chance." She shivered as she recalled memories of years past. Sensing as much, Rarity cuddled Twilight closer to her.

"Now I understand. From what I know of you, this is the first time I've ever seen you... reach out with so much goodwill towards something so unknown. You must be on pins and needles."

"I am. I think she still blames me for what happened, too."

Rarity scoffed and rolled her eyes. "No offense, but you're both crazy. Listen..." And there was that internal debate again. However, her last few sentences had pretty much made up her mind for her. "How about I help you with the interior design?"

Twilight gasped. "Rarity, you don't have to-"

"I insist. Perhaps you have a point about fellow unicorns sticking together. Besides, I shudder to think what might happen if a designer's touch isn't applied to a vehicle whose owner, I must admit, thrived just as much on style as I did."

Not five seconds after she said all that than Rarity found herself near-tackled to the ground by an overjoyed unicorn. "Oh, thank you, Rarity! Thank you so much! I promise you won't regret this!"

"Ouch! I'm not much able to help if I'm in traction, you know."

"Sorry, sorry. But with two ponies on the case, I think we can get this done a lot faster."

"Meaning it will be gone faster. I approve."


"Oh, I kid, Sparkle, I kid. Let me know when you finish the outside, and I'll take over..."
Original Synopsis:
Twilight Sparkle has spent weeks learning all she can about friendship, and is ready to pass on what she's learned so far to a unicorn she sees so much of herself in. But does she stand a chance against great power and pride...?

What Is This?:
Chapter 1 of Reforming Equines Can Be Tricky, wherein Twilight Sparkle re-establishes communication with a certain one-shot unicorn, and the unforeseen consequences thereafter. Lightly spun off from Episode 6 of the Pony Permutation Project.
It should be beyond easy to guess who the "other unicorn" is, but scene-setting is the goal more than secrecy.

Dear Princess Celestia:
When unsure of a plot, a good course of action is to craft chapters that can easily stand alone as their own pieces until you are sure of a plot. This installment and the next will endeavor to do just that!

Text by Bookish Delight, 2010-2011. My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro, not to me. This is done completely bereft of profit.
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DrewB1442 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
I kind of wish you would continue this story. I think it's well written.
Eshettar Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
I must admit, I didn't realise that about Twilight's dress and Trixie's wagon. Did not realise it at all. Great work on the story thus far. I particularly love Twilight's dedication to fixing up the wagon despite not knowing whether this olive branch will by accepted by a proud and haughty Trixie. It's also pretty cool how Rarity decides to help out more for the sake of her friend than for the person who the shattered vehicle belongs to. Plus Trixie's one of my favourite characters from the show so that clinches my love for this story. Shall be waiting on tenterhooks for the next delicious slice!
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Professional Writer
I'm really glad to hear all this--thanks for the kind words! :D
Eshettar Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
And I'll be just as glad to read the next enchanting installment! That said, no rush!
Boss-Hoss1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011
Great start! :aww:
Shad-Phoenix Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Now that you mention it, Rarity did crib design notes from that caravan! I can't believe that I didn't notice.
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Writer
I remember laughing my head off in triumph when I first saw Twilight's gown. I just had to work it into something. :)
musicmole Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
I have no idea who it is, I think maybe Luna, or Trixie.
StringPetounPing Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
I think it is probably Trixie since her outfit was covered with star while Nightmare Moon outfit is more an armor that anything else. Beside, she make a vehicule, Luna doesn't need one.
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Writer

Luna was also invited to the Gala. :)
Lurks-no-More Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
That *is* a good course of action. This is a very interesting beginning, and I'm sure to follow the rest!
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Awesome, thanks! I'll do my best in making sure the setup is worth it! :)
Gojira007 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
Ah, tres intriguing. Not only are you following up on events in "I Wish..." (the joking exchange about Twilight's "Charming" gambit made me grin, as I did so love that moment <3), you're also clearly gearing up to look into the Great And Powerful Trixie, and I must say I'm excited. Admittedly, as you say, the obviousness of who the girls are talking about makes the secrecy a bit redundant and makes this feel pretty much like pure set-up, but it's damned good set-up and I'm eager to see the follow-through, as there are a LOT of potentially interesting threads being put into place here. :)
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Writer
The secrecy... le sigh. If I may vent?

This chapter originally wasn't supposed to exist, but when I looked at my original version of this story, I realized that it would have contained a gigantic awkward infodump. A Twilight "B-side", if you will, was necessitated. I've already seen mixed responses regarding this approach (both this chapter's existence and the fact that I never mention you-know-who within it), but trust me, the original way would have been much more confusing. :D

Here's hoping I can make the next chapter worth this one, and I'm very glad you like it so far.
Gojira007 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011
I think I get what you mean, and yes, a bit of set-up to avoid a lot of info-dump is ALWAYS a good idea. ;)

And I'd say this chapter's worth it in and of itself; like I said, it's GOOD set-up, and there's something uniquely exciting about that to me. :)
Lawn-Pygmy Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
*gasp* Gleeeee~

This is going to be so much fun! I can't wait to read more. :D
BookishDelight Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you! :D
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