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I Wish -- Part 2

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(Pony Permutation Project: Episode 6)
(Part 2 of 2)

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...and not thirty minutes after she had entered the ball, Rarity found herself running outside the back exit of Canterlot Castle, into its garden.

She would not cry. She dared not cry. She'd been through worse than this. Not long before this party even began, she'd suffered through the near-destruction of her entire dress-designing career! She absolutely would not shed a single tear over an affair as trite as this!

But dash it all! She wanted to so badly!

So preoccupied was she with the events of minutes prior that she nearly passed Fluttershy without knowing it.

"Rarity?" the yellow pegasus asked, turning her head by half of a circumference as she faced Rarity running towards, then besides, then past herself. "I've never seen you move so fast before. Is something the matter?"

The unicorn skidded to a stop. "Fluttershy!"

Yes, yes! Fluttershy! A pony who would surely listen to her plight! She returned to her side, and draped her front legs around the pegasus in despair. "Oh, Fluttershy, to simply say that something is 'the matter' is a gross understatement! The dilemma I face... it is unprecedented, unheard of! Not to mention utterly humiliating!"

Fluttershy blinked, and replied slowly. "Rarity, part of me can't believe these words are coming out of my mouth but... I think you need to calm down."

Rarity allowed those words to hit her, realized their meaning, and decided to take deep breaths to do just that. "Yes, yes, Fluttershy, you're right, you're absolutely right. I'm terribly sorry. It's just... I've never had to come to grips with something like this before. Never with... with..." She trailed off.

"With what?"

Rarity let go of Fluttershy, standing back on all fours again as she regained her composure and prepared to take things from the top. "Do you remember when we all told Twilight our reasons for wanting to attend this gigantic social event in the first place?"

Fluttershy nodded happily. "Oh, very well! In fact, I'm living mine right now." She pranced around happily, brushing up against various flora and fauna in the process. "Just as I thought, the Princesses are privy to the greatest, most exotic garden ever, with plants of all sizes and colors, and animals I've never seen before in my life! And the best part is, wearing your gown makes me feel like I'm truly one with them-"

"Yes, yes, rest assured I'm very happy for you. But do you remember my purpose here?"

"Hmmmm." Fluttershy's face scrunched momentarily in thought, then lit up in accomplishment. "Oh, yes, I do remember: 'Operation Sneaky Seduction!'" Seeing Rarity's mouth agape, she quickly felt the need to explain herself. "At least, that's what Rainbow Dash called it. I, however, have no idea what she meant by that."

Rarity gritted her teeth inwardly, reminding herself to dye that pegasus's mane and tail monochrome the next time she slept. "Suffice to say there was somepony here I was interested in, yes. I came here to establish a... rapport with him, if you will."

Fluttershy stared at Rarity blankly.

Rarity tried again. "I wished to let him know that I was... you know... available?"

Still the blank stare.

"I liked him, and I wanted him to like me back."

"...OH!" Fluttershy blushed, showing that she finally understood. "So you were driven here by love! That's wonderful! I'm a big fan of love! Rarity, I'm so happy for you! How did it go?"

It was now Rarity's turn to stare at Fluttershy--only hers was less blank and far more forlorn.

"...oh. This must be why you're not happy right now. Oh, Rarity, I'm so sorry. Did he..." Her voice slipped to a whisper. "...did he reject you?"

Rarity shook her head. "Even worse: he completely ignored me!" she yelled to the skies. "For some cheeky fillies on the other side of the room who dared to wear far too much makeup, along with completely garish, uncoordinated, asymmetrical, color-clashing multitudes of gigantic jewels about their necks and flanks, covering a bombardment of truly uninspiring slapdashes of fabric and the most smug smiles you ever saw! Tasteless on all fronts!"

"I..." Try as she might, Fluttershy truly had no words. The worst she had come to any sort of rejection in her life was when she'd once had trouble with coaxing a bear out of his cave during the last Winter Wrap-Up. (True, it might have been earlier than he'd planned to end his hibernation, but only by one day! There'd been no reason for him to be so snooty and snarly and sharp-clawed about it!)

"Then again," Rarity said, "could they know something I don't? Perhaps all six of us were wrong! Perhaps excess truly is the way to go when it comes to matters of the heart!"

Her horn glowed as she used her unicorn magic powers to teleport one of her boutique's mirror's and a selection of shiny baubles directly in front of her. She began mixing and matching new patterns of them onto her dress, switching and shuffling as she tried to find something that didn't make her go blind--either physically or in disgust.

"Good heavens, Fluttershy, what could possibly be wrong with me? I've devoted every day of my life towards modeling myself as a member of high society, and rising to the standards it demands--and when I finally brush up against it... oh! To be stood up so!" Unable to find a new and suitable combination, she stopped where she was, exhaled sharply, and let the jewels fall, along with her head a second later. "Perhaps... perhaps I have been aiming too high after all."

"Um... Rarity?" Fluttershy tapped her shoulder. "I always hate to be a bother when you're feeling sorry for yourself-"

"Quite all right, Fluttershy. What is it?"

"When you ran here from the castle, did you lose one of your shoes?"

Rarity looked down at her front hooves--sure enough, one of them was indeed unshod! "Oh, my! In all the haste, I must have-"

But before Rarity could finally break down into tears, Fluttershy added, "Well, the reason I ask is that I'm wondering if the one he's holding might be it."

"'He?'"

Fluttershy pointed in a direction. Rarity followed that direction... and saw... and saw.. him! Celestia's nephew, here in front of them, absolutely! There was no mistaking that white coat... those perfect eyes... in short, that hunky family resemblance!

And what was this? Was he... yes! He was carrying her missing diamond glass shoe, gracefully returning it to her! Oh, joyous night! Had her fortunes finally turned? She considered fainting--should she faint? No, no! She'd worked too hard to lose consciousness now--the slim chance that it might land her in his embrace was hardly worth the risk!

It was decided, then: conscious she would stay. As Fluttershy walked away to leave the two alone (and to chase a particularly shiny bug floating by), Rarity stepped forward to meet the stallion. "Well, hello there."

"Hello," he replied, in a majestic voice straight out of Rarity's dreams. "I take it this shoe is yours?" He examined it. "It looks to truly be one of a kind... much like its owner."

"Custom made, on both accounts," said Rarity. "Thank you for returning it. But I'm still not speaking to you. You ignored me during the ball proper." She closed her eyes and turned her head to the side in a mock, "Hmph."

The stallion did naught but chuckle. "Are you kidding? I was afraid you would ignore me. You dazzled the rest of the assembled from even my vantage point. Unfortunately, there are always ponies I must dance with each year, lest they become offended. I was hoping that as we danced through the crowd, we would gradually make our way towards each other. But then you disappeared. I was crushed... until about thirty seconds ago." He held out Rarity's shoe once more. "May I?"

Rarity put up her hoof, allowing the shoe to be slipped back upon it. Their eyes met, and looking as deep into them as she could... Rarity gasped as she saw something unexpected, but special nonetheless. She smiled, and closed her eyes, her heart part aflutter, and part at peace.

"What do I call you?" she asked.

"'Charming' will do for tonight," the stallion replied.

"Fitting, if I say so myself."

"I was hoping you'd say that. May I have this dance?"

Rarity conjured a self-playing violin in above them. "You most certainly may."

And dance they did, sharing a slow ballad under the stars. Slow dancing was an entirely different art for ponies than at other speeds. With rapid shifts between four legs or even two in short spurts, fast dancing was not too hard to pick up. Successful slow-dancing, however, required balance training on both two and four legs, as well as a clear and focused mind. Legs were slowly shuffled, hooves were clasped together, intricate paths were drawn on the grass. It was an activity usually left to socialites, as a clear mark of their status.

Fortunately, Rarity had been practicing for years, to the point where she appeared to be even better at the art than Charming himself. To his credit, however, he did manage to keep up for the whole song, with hardly a faltered step in sight.

Eventually the song finished, the violin disappeared, and the two were left silent under the stars once more.

"That was wonderful," Rarity said, her voice a dreamy whisper. "You have no idea how long I've wanted a night just like this. Dancing in the heart of Canterlot with those who share the philosophy of the dignified... how long I've dreamed, how long I've prepared..."

"It warms my heart as well," said Charming, "to see such a happy smile on your face, Rarity. In your position, I've seen one too many pony act vain. Entitled. But you're different. I can see that. Your entire heart is in this." He moved closer, slowly. "I wish to know that heart better."

Rarity did the same, her eyes narrowing to accompany a confident smile. "Oh, I think there'll be ample opportunity for such a thing to happen... Twilight Sparkle."

"Wha-"

That was all 'Charming' was able to utter before Rarity closed the distance, allowing their lips to meet. While Rarity's eyes were blissfully closed, 'Charming's' were as wide as dinner plates--and after exactly five seconds, 'he' was blown back from Ponyville's Princess by way of an invisible force, with a bright flash to accompany it.

When things returned to normal... sure enough, a familiar starry-gowned violet unicorn lay on the ground, clutching her head in dizziness. "Owwww... what hit me?"

"Just as I thought. Come now, Twilight, such a demeanor won't pass on the night of the greatest party in Equestria. Up we go." Rarity held out a hoof, which Twilight Sparkle took in order to right herself...

"Whoa-"

...and then fall into Rarity's grip as she tried to stop the world from spinning.

"Oh, my," Rarity 'tch'ed. "It looks like you've gone and pushed yourself to your limits. And all on my account."

"Definitely feels that way," groaned Twilight, finally getting a handle on things. "You... you said my name earlier. Did that mean-"

"-that I knew all along? Well... not quite. You actually had me when you made your striking entrance, and roughly thirty seconds thereafter. But then you made the mistake of coming a little too close for comfort."

Twilight sat down, and buried her head in her hooves. "Oh, of course! When I walked up to re-shoe you..."

"I saw clean through your disguise. Please don't feel badly, Twilight. You never could have known. You may be one of the most powerful unicorns in Equestria, but your powers are of a balanced, well-rounded sort. I, however, am a specialist of appearances. For me, seeing through simple glamorization spells is... well, simple."

Twilight shook her head. "That 'simple spell' took me weeks to get to even the level I have it at now."

"And I'm sure it will come in as handy in the future as it did tonight."

"What do you mean, tonight? You said yourself that you saw right through me! I failed."

"'Failed?' Bite your tongue!" Rarity gasped. "You did no such thing!"

She stepped forward, pulled apart Twilight's hooves, and nudged her face upwards so that their eyes met. Rarity shook her head inwardly--she could see the absolute tiniest hint of tears forming at the base of Twilight Sparkle's eyes. She was hardly surprised--Twilight had shown on more than one occasion that one of the things she hated most was for one of her well-laid plans to fail.

Clearly she felt this was one of those times. Rarity was determined to set her straight.

"Look at my face, Twilight. Look at it right now."

Reluctantly, Twilight wiped her eyes, did so, and was shocked to see Rarity beaming with happiness.

"Do you see this smile? Do you remember how it was also there when we danced? It's as genuine now as it was then. You've quite the knack for atmosphere and acting, Sparkle--not to mention dance! Read up on some techniques before tonight, did we?"

Twilight nodded weakly. "I... I did, actually."

"Gosh, you did go all out preparing for this. And I'll have you know that all that preparation combined to create a fantasy most... breathtaking," Rarity said, fanning herself. "Every filly is allowed some imaginative indulgence--and in the end, I truly appreciated what you were trying to do. Any disappointment I might have initially had once I realized what was actually going on was dashed in mere moments!" She held out her hoof, helping Twilight up once again, and still standing close. "And that's why I still kissed you. I figured somepony who would go this far for me deserves one of my kisses more than one who never knew what he could have had."

"Y-yeah, I wondered about that." Twilight sighed. "So you're saying I shouldn't beat myself up about this?"

"I'd save the self-chastisement for a more deserving occasion, yes."

"Then I'll do my best to do just that. I really appreciate it, Rarity. And I'm truly glad I could help you out."

"Then my job is done--as is yours. Still, I must admit I am curious: why go so far for me?"

"It's simple, really." Twilight's analytical voice took over the proceedings--clearly she was now back in her element. "You seemed to be the only one who might have needed it. All of you were talking about your reasons for wanting to go to the Gala, but your reason was the only one who hinged on the whims of somepony else. I didn't think it was right for everypony else to live their dream here while you were left out. Because I had a special reason to be here too--and it was to see all of my friends happy. That's a dream I wouldn't have had even a year ago... because a year ago, I didn't have any friends to wish well."

"Oh, my, I'd almost forgotten that," Rarity said, draping her front legs around Twilight in a heartfelt hug. "No wonder you considered my plight to be a special case."

Twilight nodded, and returned Rarity's embrace as they sat on the grass. "I'm no stranger to rejection, Rarity. If I had my way, it would be something nopony would ever have to face. Least of all you. I look at you, and I see class and refinement combined into a single pony. I see a pony who puts style and grace above all else, and who is very, very beautiful, with or without any fancy makeup or outfits. But most of all, you're a pony who thrives on pride, yet isn't selfish about it. I've always been jealous of that. You turn heads, while I'm still learning not to turn away from them."

Rarity smiled, cuddling Twilight even more firmly. "I could give you some pointers if you wish. Lessons, even."

Twilight giggled. "No, no... I think this is something I have to learn in my own way. Thanks for the offer, though."

"I should be thanking you. For reminding me of what I should already know. And if I may--I truly wish you'd stop being so hard on yourself. The truth of the matter is, I've never known a more cordial 'antisocial.' There's far more hope for you than you think." She let go of Twilight, got back up, took one full step away, and gestured towards her. "May I have this dance?"

Twilight looked on, surprised. "Are you okay with it being me and not Celestia's charming nephew?"

Rarity smiled proudly. "I consider it an asset."

With a blush, Twilight took hold of Rarity's hoof. The violin played, and the two slow-danced again under the stars--putting a perfect end to a perfect night.

---

High in the air, camouflaged by the sky where her namesake took nightly refuge, a unicorn pegasus--who had taken time out of her rounds to watch recent events unfold--smiled and nodded to herself as she watched the two Ponyville residents shuffle along her garden.

So... the one who has 'never had a friend' also has the greatest potential for friendship. Such delightfully poetic irony... I'm beginning to understand why you were special enough to turn me. Twilight Sparkle, my sister has spoken highly of you on many occasions. Perhaps it's finally time I found out why.

Princess Luna flew back to the castle, plans already forming in her mind.

We will meet soon, my little unicorn. We have much to discuss... and to learn from one another...
Original Synopsis:
After so much preparation, the Grand Galloping Gala is here at last! How will its attendants from Ponyville fare––and most importantly, will Rarity find true love?...

What Is This?:
Episode 6 (Part 2) (of a planned 15) of the Pony Permutation Project, where I place any two of the core Friendship is Magic ponies in one place and just write down what I think might happen. There's also a loose interconnecting story, but I'm trying not to have it get in the way of things.

Dear Princess Celestia:
There appears to be a fine line between deep friendship and "shipping," especially when you've found two characters you feel work almost too excellently together. Nevertheless, I will continue to walk that line, as was my intent at the start of the Project. That way, everyone can take what they wish from each story.
As for non-Project stories and spinoffs... well, everypony will simply have to wait and see. ^_^

Text by Bookish Delight, 2010-2011. My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro, not to me. This is done completely bereft of profit.
© 2011 - 2024 BookishDelight
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Regreme's avatar
Amazing work. I can see why my friend recommended you.^^